A story was published today in Consumers Digest entitled “Waterparks: Is Public Safety Going Down the Tubes” that
paints an extremely unflattering and misleading picture of the safety of the waterpark
industry as a whole. Authored by Sara
Bongiorni, the piece makes a number of disturbing assertions to suggest that injuries
at waterparks in the United States are increasing at an alarming rate and that
the best solution to countering this trend is federal regulation of the fixed
site amusement industry. The piece takes
great issue with the so-called “patchwork” of state regulations governing the amusement
industry and even goes so far as to portray the industry as expending hundreds
of thousands of dollars per year specifically to avoid federal regulation. I’ve seen other pieces like this – usually in
the wake of a tragic accident at a park or carnival. Rarely, though, have I seen a piece that goes
to the extent that this piece does in mis-characterizing the facts and ignoring
gaping holes in the logic and reasoning underlying its conclusions. I thus feel compelled to address some of the
more troubling aspects of Ms. Bongiorni’s piece. The article though is rather lengthy, so I
thought the best way to address it was in two parts. Today, I’ll discuss the problems with Ms.
Bongiorni’s injury statistics, and how they were manipulated to paint a far direr
picture than exists in reality. In Part
2, I’ll address her contention that federal regulation is the answer to all the
industry’s problems.
At the outset, though, and in the interest of full
disclosure, I should mention what most of you already know. I am an industry advocate. I have spent over twenty years in and around
the amusement park industry, both as a park operator and as an attorney. I am a member of the International
Association of Amusement Parks & Attractions and a member of its Government
Relations Committee. I am also a member
of the New England Association of Amusement Parks & Attractions, and serve
on its board of directors. (To be perfectly clear, I speak for none of
those organizations or committees – this piece represents only my personal
views and opinions). Does this make
me biased toward the industry?
Perhaps. But it also gives me
insight into the industry that I am confident Ms. Bongiorni lacks. I have written ride procedures, implemented
new safety protocols, dealt with countless numbers of guests – both happy and
sad, and managed thousands of ride operators.
I have stood on top of lift hills and unloaded guests from roller-coaster
trains at two hundred feet. I helped
create a ride rating system later used, at least in part, by parks and
facilities all over the country. I
helped design the safety protocols for ride operations at one of the most
technologically state-of-art theme parks every constructed. I have dealt with inspectors – both state and
insurance and, unfortunately, have dealt with a few unfortunate ride incidents
as well. So yes, I might be biased about
the industry, but I’m also well-versed and experienced in its operation. I know what works for the industry and its
guests, and what doesn’t. And because of
that, I know, without any reasonable doubt, that the industry is safe and that federal
regulation of the waterpark and, more generally, the amusement industry will do
little, if anything, to make it safer.
Unfortunately, Ms. Bongiorni’s piece is available only to Consumers
Digest subscribers, so I cannot link to its full text.
And, while I have a copy, I don’t have the authorization to reprint it. I think I can make my point anyway, but
please try to find a copy and take a look – I don’t want to be accused of
hiding the ball here. So …. Where to
begin? How about with this?
“Although waterpark operators insist that their facilities are safe and
that injuries are extremely rare, our investigation found evidence of
increasing injury rates and a lack of nationwide safety standards. The number of estimated injuries that are the
result of accidents at waterparks increased by nearly 38 percent since 2009,
according to federal statistics, even though attendance at waterparks increased
just 3.8 percent over the same period.”
Well, that does not sound good, does it? But let’s unpack that a bit, because I
promise you that the reality is not nearly as dire as it appears from this
statement.
Let’s focus on the statement
that the “number of estimated injuries that are the result of accidents at
waterparks increased by nearly 38 percent since 2009.” This statement is the foundation upon which
the rest of the article is built. After
all, absent such a dramatic increase in waterslide injuries, I doubt there would
be much of a story to write. There are, however, at least two major problems
with this statement.
First, it uses one of the oldest rhetorical tricks in the
book. Rather than just telling the
reader how many injuries federal statistics claim to have occurred and putting
those numbers in the context of total visitation to waterparks, Ms. Bongiorni begins
by citing a dramatic percentage in isolation to give the appearance of a
serious problem. To illustrate, if I
were to tell you that emergency room visits for first-graders at my child’s elementary
school had increased from 3 to 4 last year (because my daughter got something
in her eye and had to go to the ER), you would likely think little of it –
particularly if I added the context that there are about 100 first graders
there. But, if I tell you that emergency
room visits increased by 33%
last year, you might well start to wonder what was going on at that school to
cause such an extreme increase. This is
the same trick Ms. Bongiorni uses here.
She is not lying, of course, she’s just not telling the
whole truth. What she is leaving out is
the context. While she does state that “the
estimated number of emergency-room visits that resulted from injuries that were
suffered at ‘public waterslides’ increased to 5,200 in 2011 … from 3,779 in
2009,” Ms. Bongiorni does not give any immediate context to these
numbers. A couple of paragraphs later, she
cites attendance statistics provided by the World Waterpark Association which
state that, in 2009, North American waterparks entertained 80 million guests
and in 2011, 83 million. The author uses
these figures to make the point that the 38% increase in injury rate between
2009 and 2011 cannot be attributed to increased attendance, which saw only a 3.8%
increase. But what she didn’t say was
this.
According to these
same figures, even assuming the accuracy of the government statistics (more on
that later) the injury rate at a waterpark in 2009 was approximately 0.0047%. In 2011, it had “skyrocketed” to .0065%. Put another way, in 2011, after a 38%
increase in waterpark injuries according to federal statistics, 1 in every 15,385 guests
visiting a waterpark incurred a reportable injury.
When you put it that way, a visit to a waterpark does not
seem nearly as scary as Consumers Digest wants it to, does it?
Now, let’s talk about those injury statistics
themselves. Ms. Bongiorni claims the statistics
she cites, which are derived from the Consumer Products Safety Commission
National Electronic Injury Surveillance System (NEISS) – a reporting system
made up of approximately 100 hospitals distributed around the country, are
indicative of “the number of estimated injuries that are the result of
accidents at waterparks.” Is
this true? Well … sort of, but not
really.
The problem is in the use of the phrase “the result of.” This implies causation. When a reader sees that phrase, the clear
inference to be drawn is that these are injuries that were caused by
waterparks. But that is not at all the
case. But don’t take my word for
it. Take the word of the CPSC.
The CPSC’s NEISS
Coding Manual, the document given to hospitals to instruct them on how to
do the reporting that is eventually compiled into the CPSC’s injury statistics,
is very clear. Hospitals that
participate in the NEISS system are instructed to report
all consumer product-related
emergency visits … , including emergency department cases, hospital admissions,
trauma center and burn center cases, and cases transferred to other hospitals….
‘Product-related’ is defined to include … all injuries where a consumer
product, sport, or recreational activity is associated with the reason
for the visit or related to a condition treated. … It is not necessary
to determine that a product was at fault to report an associated injury. … If
in doubt, report it.
Thus, the statistics on waterslide injuries cited in the Consumers
Digest piece do not say anything
about whether those injuries were actually caused
by a waterslide, only that they were associated with or related to a
waterslide. According to the CPSC’s
reporting manual, therefore, a person who slips and falls while climbing a
waterslide staircase or on a sidewalk next to a waterslide would be a
reportable event for a NEISS hospital.
In fact, here are some of the actual injuries that made up the 2011
statistics:
- A 13 year old female bumped her elbow going down a waterslide and three weeks later went to a hospital complaining of pain;
- A 15 year old male sprained his foot after
hitting it on a board at a water slide at
camp;
- A 15 year old male sprained his foot sliding into a board on a water slide at camp (not a duplicate – two separate incidents apparently);
- A 10 year old male fell while climbing the ladder of a water slide sustaining a contusion to his toe;
- A 9 year old girl fell while skating, injuring her hand, and had previously bumped her head on a waterslide. She was treated for a hyperextended left hand and a headache;
- An 11 year old male was diagnosed with second degree sunburn on his chest after visiting a waterpark
None of these have any obvious connection to the safe
operation of a waterslide, but all of them were included in the government
statistics cited in the Consumers Digest article.
And that is what makes it, quite frankly, amazing that the
article also posits that “the estimates from NEISS might underestimate the
number of injuries” occurring at waterparks.
Such a statement makes no sense in light of the broad reporting duty
required of NEISS participating hospitals.
Given that a bad sunburn makes the cut as a reportable waterslide
injury, it is difficult to imagine that the statistics are actually underestimating water park injuries.
Moreover, Ms. Bongiorni summarily rejects the position of
IAAPA spokesperson Colleen Mangone, that “if the raw data NEISS collects come from
hospitals in areas that have a disproportionate number of waterparks, NEISS estimates
by be inflated.” Indeed,
scientific data backs up Ms. Mangone’s position. In a study titled, “Limitations of child injury data from the
CPSC’s National Electronic Injury Surveillance System: the case of baby walker related data,”
published in the journal Injury Prevention in 1996, researchers found that the
NEISS reporting system resulted in over-reporting of injuries associated with
baby walkers. That study reported that only
two hospitals
reported 14% of all the NEISS baby walker related injuries though they
encompassed 2% of the patients among NEISS Samples. In some years, … one very large children’s hospital
in the sample contributed as much as 17% of all weighted walker related injury
estimates. … For trend analysis of product related injuries at the level of
occurrence studied for baby walkers, NEISS suffers from poor sensitivity due to
relatively large sampling error. … For all children’s injuries, NEISS’s
hospital type sampling scheme reflects a random geographic imbalance from 1991
to 1994 because one north eastern state contributes both of the reporting
children’s hospitals.
If the NEISS reporting system has been scientifically proven
to have resulted in over-reporting of baby-walker injuries due to uneven
geographic dispersion of reporting hospitals, why could the same not also be
true of waterslide injuries – particularly given that the product - i.e. the waterslide – is not nearly as evenly
geographically dispersed as a baby-walker.
When one considers that NEISS hospitals are instructed to broadly report
any injuries “associated with” a water slide or waterpark regardless of
causation, that these hospitals may well be unevenly distributed across the
country in relation to waterparks, and that waterparks themselves are not
evenly distributed either, it takes no stretch of the imagination to see how
the injury data could be inflated.
But to recognize any of this would be to undermine the
entire premise of Consumer Digest’s report:
that water parks are experiencing a dramatic rise in their injury rates
and that the industry is working hard to keep its parks from becoming more safe
by fighting federal regulation. I think
I’ve pretty well addressed the former point.
In part 2 of this piece, I’ll take on the latter. See you then.
Nicely stated Erik.
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